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03-11-2004, 07:13 AM
Hmm… maybe this would pass for an essay. I'm no writer! Looking for someone to read it and ask questions, correct errors or suggest things to be added. It started as a sample that was to be tested for usefullness before a bunch of similar ones were made for a project I wanted to do a few months ago but abandoned and may take up again.
What does The Silmarillion tell us about Finwe?
He was born at Cuivieven before the Valar summoned the Quendi to dwell in Valinor. Along with Ingwe and his friend Elwe, he went to Valinor as ambassador. He was the leader of the Noldor, and King in Tirion where he dwelt until moving away to Formenos. He asked Ulmo to return to Middle-earth for the Teleri. His first wife was Miriel, and she passed away not long after the birth of Feanor, her only child. Finwe took a second wife, Indis of the Vanyar, and they had two children together - Fingolfin and then Finarfin. When Feanor was banished, his father went with him to Formenos. He left the rule in Tirion to Fingolfin. Finwe was eventually slain at his doors by Morgoth during the Darkening of Valinor, being the only person present who did not flee when the darkness came.
But lets take a look behind the scenes... see the birth of the tale, and find interesting bits left out of The Silmarillion.
We begin with the Lost Tales (began in 1916-17) where Finwe first came to exist on paper. Here Finwe was lord of the Noldoli, and Turgon is was son. Feanor existed at this point, but there is no indication he was of any relation to Finwe. Feanor's father is here Bruithwir - and guess what happens to him. He was slain by Melko along with other gnomes while protecting the treasure when Melko attacked during the festival! So, what became of Finwe? He went into exile with the gnomes, his son Turgon was born, and according to emmendations on the second draft Finwe was slain in the battle of Unnumbered tears, which happens differently here than in The Silmarillion. As CT notes, Finwe's leadership role and death in this battle is one Fingon (who does not yet exist) plays in later texts.
There is no banishment of Feanor yet, but the gnomes were previously made to leave Kor. When they were later permitted to return, Feanor stayed behind in Sirnumen with others.
Was Bruithwir Finwe by another name and Finwe just some passing elf whose name would be used for the character Bruithwir? I do not think so. Some that is told of Finwe here stays true of him after he becomes that father of Feanor slain in the Melko's attack on the Trees. Most importantly, he was the leader of the Noldoli and one of the three ambassadors of the Quendi. The characters were merged. On the matter of Finwe going into exile it is worth noting that when Feanor speaks before the gnomes persuading them to return to Middle-earth, Finwe counselled against him. He says that at the least they should seek Manwe's approval before departing. When Finwe sees his counsel is over-ruled here, he goes into exile just the same, so as not to be parted from his people. One cannot help being reminded of the roles of Fingolfin and to a degree even Finarfin (CT notes Finarfin in this regard) in the later versions of the tale.
The names of Finwe in Lost Tales:
Finwe
Nolome
Fingolma
Golfinweg - gnomish name
The elements of these names are given as skill & cunning, and knowledge/lore.
Turgon is a mighty son, but lets find the rest of Finwe's family!
There is an early prose fragment, where one Gelmir is named as King of the gnomes and his three sons are Delin, Golfin and Luthien. CT comments that Gelmir (also making an apearance in a lay of the fall of Gondolin) is to be identified with Finwe. These strange sons were a passing stage. There is no hint of kinship with Feanor, and that was the last of those sons.
We next hear about Finwe and family In The Lay of the Children of Hurin(1918-1925) and the poem fragment The Flight of the Noldoli. Both texts are found in HoME 3. In CT's commentary to that poem he gives an analysis of the new developements to the royal house of Finwe emerging in the lay, poem, and the Sketch (which I'll explain below). In the poem Finn is the father of Feanor, and Finn is elsewhere given as a gnomish name of Finwe. Goodbye Bruithwir! In the Lay Fingolfin emerges as a son of Finwe, as does Finrod (this Finrod is Finarfin by his early name while his son was called Inglor and Felagund). Things with names get complicated here, but Fingon had also emerged now, having been emended to 'Fingon' from 'Finweg' (an early name of Fingon and a name of Finwe) at places in the Lay. CT also gives here a table showing Finwe, his three sons, and all of their children. The descentans of Finwe in this table differ from The Silmarillion only in that Galadriel is not present yet, and some names are spelled differently, or as in the case of Isfin/Aredhel, a different name is used.
There is a Sketch of the mythology (originally written in 1926 but later revisions were made). This is brief outline of the Silmarillion, also called the Earliest Silmarillion is found in HoME 4. This Sketch is the first prose form of the tales (save a few fragments) since Lost Tales, and was written to give background information on the Turin lay (HoME 3). Emmendations were made to the lay after this Sketch was written. The change from Finweg (which is used in Sketch) to Fingon is one of them.
So what was Finwe up to in the late 20s and 30s? In the early annals found in HoME 4 and 5, along with the Sketch and the Quenta that was an expansion of that Sketch and the Quenta Silmarillion that was the version to follow that Quenta expansion, he is ambassador, still king of the Noldoli, but now unlike Lost Tales, he does not return to Middle-earth. He goes with Feanor into banishment, and is slain by Melkor at his doors. Other gnomes were slain there also, as in the Lost Tales they were with Bruithwir. Later he would die alone. There is no second marriage yet, and not any mention of Miriel.
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What does The Silmarillion tell us about Finwe?
He was born at Cuivieven before the Valar summoned the Quendi to dwell in Valinor. Along with Ingwe and his friend Elwe, he went to Valinor as ambassador. He was the leader of the Noldor, and King in Tirion where he dwelt until moving away to Formenos. He asked Ulmo to return to Middle-earth for the Teleri. His first wife was Miriel, and she passed away not long after the birth of Feanor, her only child. Finwe took a second wife, Indis of the Vanyar, and they had two children together - Fingolfin and then Finarfin. When Feanor was banished, his father went with him to Formenos. He left the rule in Tirion to Fingolfin. Finwe was eventually slain at his doors by Morgoth during the Darkening of Valinor, being the only person present who did not flee when the darkness came.
But lets take a look behind the scenes... see the birth of the tale, and find interesting bits left out of The Silmarillion.
We begin with the Lost Tales (began in 1916-17) where Finwe first came to exist on paper. Here Finwe was lord of the Noldoli, and Turgon is was son. Feanor existed at this point, but there is no indication he was of any relation to Finwe. Feanor's father is here Bruithwir - and guess what happens to him. He was slain by Melko along with other gnomes while protecting the treasure when Melko attacked during the festival! So, what became of Finwe? He went into exile with the gnomes, his son Turgon was born, and according to emmendations on the second draft Finwe was slain in the battle of Unnumbered tears, which happens differently here than in The Silmarillion. As CT notes, Finwe's leadership role and death in this battle is one Fingon (who does not yet exist) plays in later texts.
There is no banishment of Feanor yet, but the gnomes were previously made to leave Kor. When they were later permitted to return, Feanor stayed behind in Sirnumen with others.
Was Bruithwir Finwe by another name and Finwe just some passing elf whose name would be used for the character Bruithwir? I do not think so. Some that is told of Finwe here stays true of him after he becomes that father of Feanor slain in the Melko's attack on the Trees. Most importantly, he was the leader of the Noldoli and one of the three ambassadors of the Quendi. The characters were merged. On the matter of Finwe going into exile it is worth noting that when Feanor speaks before the gnomes persuading them to return to Middle-earth, Finwe counselled against him. He says that at the least they should seek Manwe's approval before departing. When Finwe sees his counsel is over-ruled here, he goes into exile just the same, so as not to be parted from his people. One cannot help being reminded of the roles of Fingolfin and to a degree even Finarfin (CT notes Finarfin in this regard) in the later versions of the tale.
The names of Finwe in Lost Tales:
Finwe
Nolome
Fingolma
Golfinweg - gnomish name
The elements of these names are given as skill & cunning, and knowledge/lore.
Turgon is a mighty son, but lets find the rest of Finwe's family!
There is an early prose fragment, where one Gelmir is named as King of the gnomes and his three sons are Delin, Golfin and Luthien. CT comments that Gelmir (also making an apearance in a lay of the fall of Gondolin) is to be identified with Finwe. These strange sons were a passing stage. There is no hint of kinship with Feanor, and that was the last of those sons.
We next hear about Finwe and family In The Lay of the Children of Hurin(1918-1925) and the poem fragment The Flight of the Noldoli. Both texts are found in HoME 3. In CT's commentary to that poem he gives an analysis of the new developements to the royal house of Finwe emerging in the lay, poem, and the Sketch (which I'll explain below). In the poem Finn is the father of Feanor, and Finn is elsewhere given as a gnomish name of Finwe. Goodbye Bruithwir! In the Lay Fingolfin emerges as a son of Finwe, as does Finrod (this Finrod is Finarfin by his early name while his son was called Inglor and Felagund). Things with names get complicated here, but Fingon had also emerged now, having been emended to 'Fingon' from 'Finweg' (an early name of Fingon and a name of Finwe) at places in the Lay. CT also gives here a table showing Finwe, his three sons, and all of their children. The descentans of Finwe in this table differ from The Silmarillion only in that Galadriel is not present yet, and some names are spelled differently, or as in the case of Isfin/Aredhel, a different name is used.
There is a Sketch of the mythology (originally written in 1926 but later revisions were made). This is brief outline of the Silmarillion, also called the Earliest Silmarillion is found in HoME 4. This Sketch is the first prose form of the tales (save a few fragments) since Lost Tales, and was written to give background information on the Turin lay (HoME 3). Emmendations were made to the lay after this Sketch was written. The change from Finweg (which is used in Sketch) to Fingon is one of them.
So what was Finwe up to in the late 20s and 30s? In the early annals found in HoME 4 and 5, along with the Sketch and the Quenta that was an expansion of that Sketch and the Quenta Silmarillion that was the version to follow that Quenta expansion, he is ambassador, still king of the Noldoli, but now unlike Lost Tales, he does not return to Middle-earth. He goes with Feanor into banishment, and is slain by Melkor at his doors. Other gnomes were slain there also, as in the Lost Tales they were with Bruithwir. Later he would die alone. There is no second marriage yet, and not any mention of Miriel.
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