Lantalasse's Book Of Sad Tales and Songs

[Lantalasse]

ok the link is my very first attempt to write a short story in English( so please, please be gentle when you pass out judgement)

anyway i hope someone likes it, if nobody does then you'll give me reasons to improve so it's all good!
:)

[Lantalasse]

ok i can see that people aren't reaaaly interested.....anyway... i'll try to post photographs next, instead of a story.....it makes more sense.....

[Lantalasse]

Hi all,
this time i'm not going to bore you with stories
this is a picture i took of a friend
tell me what you think

[Doomseeker]

Hi I just read your story and thought it was pretty good.
Interesting composition in the picture too.

[Lantalasse]

wowowowowowowo someone replied!!!!! :)

thanks that's just the first draft of the story it's pretty lousy as a narrative but i think the plot is quite interesting.

the picture hasn't scanned really well but i do consider it quite good.

thanks again for repliying:)

[Wonko The Sane]

I LOVE the photograph!
How did you DO that?!