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Astaldo

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There will be a time
When darkness shall rise
And all that once were bright
Shall perish and die.

But in that darkness
A miracle will happen
And light will rise at the end
To free the world again.
 

Lhunithiliel

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Hey, poets, a new 'competitor' is on stage!
And what a competitor !!!!

Welcome to these halls, Astaldo! :)
 

Astaldo

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Well thank you Lhunithiliel. It's not great (I wrote it during a class in 5 minutes) but I think anyone who has the meaning of Prof. Tolkien's works can easily write a poem.

I have another one that I just made and it is called: The Dunadan.

I ride from the North
For the people I love
I've come to save the world
And live free once more.
 

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i did notice that new "phenomenon", Lhun, little late yesterday :)

nice to see new "pens" around... welcome, Astaldo. (5 min sketches, eh? wonder what you're able of when sit for some more... go ahead, try:D)

what about our wraith? did you lose your "touch"?
 

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Astaldo said:
There will be a time
When darkness shall rise
And all that once were bright
Shall perish and die.

But in that darkness
A miracle will happen
And light will rise at the end
To free the world again.
But then most certainly a wraith shaw arise,
all hope and merriness she'll finalize.
And if a curse is to come,
believe me it has come and you better run...run!
:D:p

Heh...just kidding...0:-o) :p
 

Lhunithiliel

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Don't ask me to write poetry, kids!

Now... 'want a Contract or a Power of attorney ... or a Project for the EC? Call me! This is what I'm burried in! What poetry to find there ?!!! :(
But the 'sun will again shine on my side of the street!' :D And I'll be able to again return to the these worlds .... Boy! Have I become an escapist?!!! :p

You ... carry on ! I'll catch up with you. :D
 

Hirila

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But then most certainly a wraith shaw arise,
all hope and merriness she'll finalize.
And if a curse is to come,
believe me it has come and you better run...run!
And the moment she turns in on us,
Belive the world gone in just one stroke!
She'll fold her wings (or whatever she has)
And laughs out loud to tell a joke.


Hmm.. I'm afraid I'm no good in telling stories in rhymes, but at least I jump in to defend our dear lhunish Wraith... aahhh.. oops, wraithish Lhun... hmmmm...SIZE]
 

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:D

And funny it will be...
But who will dare laugh,
too scared to breathe...you; me?
Don't! Don't! She'll make your spine roughy rough! :D
Oh, she bites!
Bitter words for the mortal man...
Look how the Wraith the Devil rides!
For the last time I tell you...run! Run!
She's coming; she's coming...:D
On the silver vessel; on the golden prow.
And, oh, she's stunning!
But do you feel like Apocalypse Now?
:D

Mum, I'm kidding, you know...:)
 

Lhunithiliel

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THANK YOU , LADIES, FOR THE GOOD LAUGH THIS EARLY MORNING !!! :D :D

(The neighbours must've been very much startled to hear my laugh in the quiet of the Saturday morning!!! )

Keep on, keep on ... Create more verses about the 'great wraith' ! Why!!! I do like it!!! :p :D
 

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moving quick
as tunes in a lively song
thru darkness thick
manouvering among silent throng
of her relatives; friends? family? kin?
stomping about oak's long masive shadow
not even tiny noise making;
on grey and mist-flooded meadow
she dances amidst the sea of shades
hither and thither - till all darkness fades...

but no, don't be afraid
her hissing sounds from under cloak.
inside she's fragile as a nereid
soft heart melting as yolk (esp. among friendly folk;))


--------
my my... one day i'm gone and... i see rhyming lines bloom during my absence; should i disappear more often? :)
 

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Manveru said:

but no, don't be afraid
her hissing sounds from under cloak.
inside she's fragile as a nereid
soft heart melting as yolk (esp. among friendly folk;))
Oh, Mighty Dark Lord of mine!!!
I have been 'unmasked'!!! :eek:

:D

my my... one day i'm gone and... i see rhyming lines bloom during my absence; should i disappear more often? :)
I was already wondering where that half / half :p was !!!
 

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Lhunithiliel said:
I was already wondering where that half / half :p was !!!
half here
half there
in half dear
in awe i stare
on lovely gear
eye prefers bare [lidless eye, of course; it's tolkien related rhyme, not some perverted...]
heart's fighting fear
who else would dare?


:)
 

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Hehehe :D
How do you manage to even 'draw' with words? :eek:
Looking at your rhymes, they form such a well-shaped pyramide! :)
 

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a pyramid? mmm, Mel would've loved that :)

thx, Lhun. frankly, it's not that hard. try...
 

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In ancient time..............with love for rhymes,
Mel and Man......................are drinking wine.
Pricking tine........................is eating fine! :D
A historic pine................takes their mind,
but when love's a cherished vine,
nothing is of more worthy price!
So she left her ancient life:
'You want me and you're mine!'


:D
 

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tear dances below eyelid
face down with silent mime
if i don't clap, little one
it's because it doesn't rhyme...


(thx)
 

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No, love needs no tears blind.
No, love is happy of no applause.
Love only wants you two to find.
And in her waters wildly douse.
 

Astaldo

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I've come from the dark
You've got nothing but to run
My friends are pain and fear
You can't see me but hear
I will destroy you all
Until you are no more
 

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